tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1563489762681977658.post2981324595779648358..comments2011-06-08T10:08:10.542-07:00Comments on Mai's Blog: SomedayMaihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18178560517474153975noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1563489762681977658.post-29240784352150988312011-05-19T11:36:10.239-07:002011-05-19T11:36:10.239-07:00Nice. Perhaps "flowers wait ..." would ...Nice. Perhaps "flowers wait ..." would help create a more concrete image. Remember that your poetry needs to be able to stand without the help of the visual. I love the nature use.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12137060905409195965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1563489762681977658.post-34207733395379688312011-05-17T10:16:17.553-07:002011-05-17T10:16:17.553-07:00This is a really nice short poem. I really enjoy r...This is a really nice short poem. I really enjoy reading your poems because they are always about nature. Well done.Isabelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03628458540306726735noreply@blogger.com