tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1563489762681977658.post6040709436602634055..comments2011-06-08T10:08:10.542-07:00Comments on Mai's Blog: Aren't We Thankful to See ColorMaihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18178560517474153975noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1563489762681977658.post-32781188702300728512010-11-08T07:19:45.524-08:002010-11-08T07:19:45.524-08:00This is a comment about your blog:
I really like h...This is a comment about your blog:<br />I really like how your blog reflects you. I also like how you have your smart writing goals and your vocab. The organization in your blog is really good. You use sub pages which is really helpful. Your blog is really easy to read and find pieces and is also full of writing pieces.Isabelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03628458540306726735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1563489762681977658.post-47174713389942809932010-11-04T12:39:26.670-07:002010-11-04T12:39:26.670-07:00I am really glad that you put this piece up, I am ...I am really glad that you put this piece up, I am so happy to see everyone's responses to The Giver. I also looked around a bit after the poem and realized what we see...and how boring our room is!Sarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17825353042244617827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1563489762681977658.post-69175961623961083162010-11-04T07:54:18.662-07:002010-11-04T07:54:18.662-07:00I like how you dedicated your piece to The Giver. ...I like how you dedicated your piece to The Giver. I especially thought that you described "purple wispy skies" very well. The picture was also a very nice touch so that I could visually see what you were describing. Even if you hadn't had a picture,I would have been able to paint a picture in my mind because you were so descriptive. :)Madelinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00289357262263718276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1563489762681977658.post-73935735512028563252010-11-02T09:54:58.636-07:002010-11-02T09:54:58.636-07:00I really liked how you added the author's note...I really liked how you added the author's note to explain why you were writing this poem If you hadn't I would have thought you were just writing a poem about colors. Nice Job!!Isabelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03628458540306726735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1563489762681977658.post-17508743977444016662010-11-02T08:43:48.914-07:002010-11-02T08:43:48.914-07:00After reading the book The Giver I really felt tha...After reading the book The Giver I really felt thankful that I could see in color and this a a great poem to describe it. I like you listed the main colors and what they look like.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04182441820019388184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1563489762681977658.post-66549412083152721922010-11-02T08:42:49.538-07:002010-11-02T08:42:49.538-07:00I like how you colored the color words! I think th...I like how you colored the color words! I think that we should be thankful to see color!Abbihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06664370654112371120noreply@blogger.com