Thursday, November 18, 2010

River

Author's Note:  I used Stream of Consciousness to make this poem on a river. 

Narrow and cool
Moving rapidly
Splashing at turns
Murky, dark waters
Rushing down for miles
and ends up in the Gulf

3 comments:

  1. I liked how you used the stream of consciousness and you had a lot of good descriptive words.

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  2. The thing I enjoy most here is your economic writing style; every word is important, and there is no sense of recklessness that often plagues poor poetry.

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  3. I liked how you were really descriptive and I think that i will remember it.

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