"Character cannot be developed in ease and quiet. Only through the experience of trial and suffering can the soul be strengthened, vision cleared, ambition inspired, and success achieved." ~Helen Keller
Thursday, November 18, 2010
River
Author's Note: I used Stream of Consciousness to make this poem on a river.
The thing I enjoy most here is your economic writing style; every word is important, and there is no sense of recklessness that often plagues poor poetry.
I liked how you used the stream of consciousness and you had a lot of good descriptive words.
ReplyDeleteThe thing I enjoy most here is your economic writing style; every word is important, and there is no sense of recklessness that often plagues poor poetry.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you were really descriptive and I think that i will remember it.
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