Thursday, December 16, 2010

Traveling the Universe

Author's Note: I was inspired by my report on the sun, to do a poem on the universe.  I wanted it to be creative and use Stream of Consciousness.  

I see myself zooming through space,
Planets are revolving,
Millions of stars are shining,
Asteroids and comets are flying by,
Moons are dented with craters,
Galaxies are sparkling far off in the distance,
But you can't stay forever because,
There is no air


  1. Wow, I really liked how you ended it, because I think the ending of a poem is really important. I also liked how you used a Stream of Consciousness.

  2. I liked how you used stream of consciousness! Also I like how you wrote about something that you love.