"Character cannot be developed in ease and quiet. Only through the experience of trial and suffering can the soul be strengthened, vision cleared, ambition inspired, and success achieved." ~Helen Keller
Tuesday, May 17, 2011
Someday
Author's Note: I am playing around with writing a haiku. As usual my inspiration is nature.
Nice. Perhaps "flowers wait ..." would help create a more concrete image. Remember that your poetry needs to be able to stand without the help of the visual. I love the nature use.
This is a really nice short poem. I really enjoy reading your poems because they are always about nature. Well done.
ReplyDeleteNice. Perhaps "flowers wait ..." would help create a more concrete image. Remember that your poetry needs to be able to stand without the help of the visual. I love the nature use.
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